P.S. besides mis-spells, there are missing words within the literacy of sentences. Check drafts better.

This is so good. All of the hinting about the crack in the damn from the previous few chapters has finally led up to this. We also get the reveal of dauntless, after so much build up. I can't wait to see what happens next. I am deeply worried for Dusk and Jamie though.

I hope you are okay, I miss reading your stories.

This story is great! You did an excellent job. I can't wait to see how Josh changes

There is a number of mis-spells. Othwise, it works. However, this being the second storylines of yours I have read, watch that it doesn’t become, coldly, over ‘medicalised’. Lastly, from reading your Superman storyline, I suggest that ‘gaying’ a victim falls into a disappointingly ‘frat’ level of sexual description. A repeating example of is the names you give to the cocks of Luthor’s gang members.. no pun intended. Meanwhile, I’m glad I stumbled across your site.

This is so cathartic. This is honestly what I’ve been waiting for Leo to do. I’m pretty sure he’ll cave and get fucked by Jud at some point, but dear God, the absolute glee Jud has shown truly dismantling any other man who’s shown Leo interest, has been infuriating. I don’t care if this is all about jealousy and he wants to show Leo that no one will ever be good enough for his little boy except for him BUT GODDAMN to have that smirk wiped off for one damn moment feels incredible… I’ve been so annoyed that Jud always gets to gloat in the end, not caring that it’s actively hurting and confusing Leo. On another note, your characters, man, they’re all so…thought out. Even the “ass-of-the-week” characters end up being so engaging with their own flavors, all of them would’ve been great love interests had they not been dickmatized. And onto Leo…he’s hard not to root for. Naive, young, horny, but vulnerable, he doesn’t want to be a bad person, he wants to get his rocks off but he’s also starved of a connection. And good on him. He drew a line, he knows his limits and he stuck to them. He has standards GODDAMNIT! He resisted Larson AND his uncle like woahhhh. And Jud, hot as hell, annoying in a way that an older male relative with no boundaries is but supposedly harmless over all, but you make this…clever insertion, I guess. Idk what to call it. Maybe a character choice? It’s basically assigning him the “weaponized incompetence” trait but instead it’s “weaponized sexual prowess”, where he just can’t help but wave his dick around and get any man hooked. And instead of having him effing grow an actual pair and butt out, Leo has to be the one to adjust and move on and hope and pray that Jud doesn’t come around _(and)_fuck around. Kinda like when someone weaponizes incompetence to avoid any responsibility. Jud, whether he cares or not, is putting it to Leo to ‘try again’ while he’s just reaping the “reward” without facing the consequences, up until now, he was sure that Leo would never dare ruin this for him. Like at some point, how would any son feel if their dad’s going after all their love interests and the dad always gets rewarded by having the love interests swooning over him instead AND expects nothing to change between him and his son?!? If I were Leo, I would’ve gone no contact. I would’ve ran away. Hell, I would even tell on him and make sure everyone knows about it. I’m burning him to the ground and pulling up a mirror to him to show him that he fucked his life over when he decided to fuck with mine. And maybe this is because of my own history but the absolute nerve of Jud to tell him AGAIN to not tell on him, GAWWWWWD as hot as these scenes are, you have bottled such a great freaking moment, a great shift in the story that’s been building up to this. I can’t wait for the resolution! Even if they end up doing it, dear god, I hope Leo doesn’t make it easy. He deserves to twist the knife a little, maybe even squeeze a lime in the wound for all I care.

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Kyle, I wonder if it was intentional that you didn't publish this series on GaySpiral (only on GayKinky). To me it seems to be a classic hypnosis and brainwash story...

It's been a long time since I read a story as creative as this, this concept is so good! This could easily become a series.

Lord and Master. This is Mark from Cuntruction. This was amazing. So glad to see you back. Please continue to this story. Please. Turn him into a muscled working man slut. Please