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2_Zealots
12/28/21, 2:16 AM
I liked how Sanjay decided to make the best out of his situation by using the djinn's spell over the prof to get info on the djinn, I also liked the element of suspense cause now he has limited time before djinn escapes again, which would be very bad for him [but very GOOD for us ;)] I also hope the trucker comes back again if the hint in this chapter is anything to go by, overall really enjoying the story so far
12/27/21, 11:46 PM
I didn't realize that my first submission, Professionalism was supposed to be the first chapter in this trilogy. Oh well
12/27/21, 10:43 PM
Bittersweet Plant-TF that explores death and love!? You'll be hearing from my lawyers. (Wait, that's a bit unrealistic) ...you'll be hearing from my lawy**er**. (Wait, that's a bit unrealistic) ...you'll be hearing from *me*, logged in with a different, more lawyer-y sounding username. Joking aside, I found it quite a bold direction for you. Full points for enterprise. The story itself I found 'frustratingly close to excellent', but oddly paced in places, and oddly expressed in places. Then again, I was always going to be a fussy with this one since A; It's extremely close to my own style, so I am *as* hyperfocused on it's flaws as I'd be with my own stuff. And B; I was already reading through spoiler-tinted-shades since I remember you talking about this specific narrative on the discord and the idea stuck in my head (I wonder why :) ) Write more stories like this, please.
12/27/21, 10:18 PM
I love this series! Can't wait to see what happens to the remaining two!
12/27/21, 6:25 AM
An excellent story! A much more kind rendering of the transformations into muscle cows and bulls.

12/27/21, 9:59 PM
@Cutlerfan Thanks, Cutler. I'm glad you appreciated that aspect of the story. I tried to keep it kinky but make it a bit less dark, because that's my preference as well.
12/27/21, 5:27 PM
reading again and again. good start. very impressive
12/27/21, 4:38 PM
i really cant wait to read more of this. this story is the best. will we get more please?
12/27/21, 4:25 PM
Oh boy this was a hot read. I can't wait to see what happens to the other two now.
12/27/21, 1:25 PM
You're a gifted writer. More, please!
Anonymous
12/26/21, 10:38 PM
also something id imagine be really hot,tom streaming like usual while nate is worshipping their feet and jack on their cock

12/27/21, 11:26 AM
@anonymous Have you been reading my draft notes for future chapters? Hahaha ;)

12/27/21, 12:48 PM
@FKH19 i dont know why this comment is anonymous but its mine,and my thought was that the program creator who is totally not Dan ;),gets tom to somehow embed his app into his streams as like subliminal messaging turning all his adult viewers into incest sluts for their own family

12/27/21, 12:50 PM
@Dapper i think its dan because nate sent him a pic of him and tom cuddling and the next day was totally chill and also chilly referencing nate being a footslave for his