Recent Comments

11/28/21, 4:09 PM
oooh i loved these two chapters, and i'm immediately invested in the characters. cant wait to see whats next!
11/28/21, 3:43 PM
Dude this is so hot great story keep it up!
11/28/21, 2:03 PM
I love your writing but I now have a favorite scene. Dax being turned out and begging to be fucked was amazing! I'll be happy with whatever we get but a scene of Archie topping a ecstatic Dax would be glorious!
Nov 26, 2021
Anonymous
11/28/21, 1:58 PM
This story needs a sequel. it should have more chapter.
11/28/21, 12:31 PM
Please do another chapter, I have to know how this ends.
easdf
11/28/21, 12:23 PM
Even before reading, I just have to say that the title is brilliant!
11/28/21, 12:08 PM
You have my undivided attention.... Ive been reading with a slight sweat Hot
Anonymous
11/28/21, 10:15 AM
Disturbing but well written and HOT.
11/28/21, 9:43 AM
Fantastic. Simply fantastic. I picked this story up a few days ago, then went on a speed-reading spree, going through the chapters. Spent a bit in agony, waiting for this one. And, well, I'm enjoying this more than ever. It's nice to see the softer, gentler side of someone with Archie, and I can't wait to see more like this.

11/28/21, 10:11 AM
@Lancelot Thanks man, I'm glad you're liking it.
Nov 24, 2021
11/28/21, 9:05 AM
another classic!