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boi98229
10/16/21, 8:15 AM
Wonderful! My favorite focus for mind control stories is the seduction, the inexorable loss of control one step at a time, with the submissive often well aware but unable to effectively save himself. i am happily off to read the next chapter!
10/16/21, 7:48 AM
Holy *shit* that was intense. Looking forward to more as it comes!
10/15/21, 10:36 PM
My my my, Police Lieutenant Greg Barber, haven't you come a long way. I remember when you "jumped at the chance to go in there and do your duty." The stories you said "always intrigued and aroused you." Now you are a slave calling powerful men "Master." Could you have imagined a more awesome fate, Lt Barber? You lucky cow you. I enjoyed Greg's transformation. I can't wait to see how his new life sorts out.

Yourguy92
10/16/21, 6:59 AM
@PupScout it's such a pleasure to read your thoughts each time 😍
10/7/21, 5:13 AM
Wow that was something else

10/8/21, 3:18 AM
@jaxon — In a good way or a bad way? XD

10/16/21, 3:24 AM
Absolutely a good way @Ethan White
10/16/21, 3:20 AM
Its very sexy to see the orders being carried out, especially when there is helping rather then humilitation. Making straight guys to sexy gay things under a gay guys command is fun to read. I do hope there is sex at some point though havimg some straight guys to gay things could be fun. Like he commands a bunch of homophobic rednecks to play with each others holes while he watches. It could be fun if he helps them be better people afterward. Hehe
10/16/21, 3:19 AM
What an amazingly hot story! Incredibly good use of 2nd person perspective.
Tranceguy
10/15/21, 10:34 PM
great story man! I really enjoyed those parts with the whistle blow. that was so deviously and hypnotic. please more of that. thanks!

10/16/21, 12:07 AM
@Tranceguy The whistle was a fun trigger! Thanks you glad you enjoyed man!
10/16/21, 12:07 AM
Been eagerly awaiting this. Amazing! Can't wait for the next chapter.
10/15/21, 11:59 PM
Well I loved this story, and it certainly was not too long, or not dark enough for my tastes. This was reminiscent of Apollyon and got me off the way that series did but without the gnawing existential dread. And yes, sir, you can sure as hell write a sex scene.
10/15/21, 5:16 PM
Definitely a hot story. I love the rug pull at the end then a final bit of torture. Very well done!

10/15/21, 9:14 PM
@Keinok82561 Thank you so much! Glad you liked the ending twist! I feel meam having even thought of it 😆

10/15/21, 10:25 PM
@TieMeEdgeMe it is definitely on a darker side of things if you ever did a part 2 after so long if the hypno broke it would be hilarious.