Recent Comments

8/20/25, 11:33 AM
Oh I like this, not so much the body swap idea, but the rivalry and the golden boy air that oozes off Devon. Love the contrats between them. Which would make it so much better when the 'loser' humiliates the golden boy. I know in tags it says no sex, but any chance Ziggy can get a hold of a mind control device or blackmail to enslave and humiliate Devon in a bad ending? Would love to see him brought down bada t the hands of someone he sees as inferior!
8/20/25, 9:56 AM
Looking forwards to this. Going to be interesting to see what XOR is capable of, and why it chooses to confine itself to the treaty.
8/20/25, 6:15 AM
I swear to serve and surrender.

8/20/25, 9:12 AM
@[jakey](/user/show/994256) Good slave.
8/19/25, 11:31 PM
Oh wow. Amazing. Perfection.

8/20/25, 9:12 AM
@[fgdbar](/user/show/10001414) Much appreciated.
412
8/19/25, 11:23 PM
epilogue please? you've done amazing with this!

8/20/25, 9:12 AM
@[412](/user/show/10013456) Thank you! I don’t have an epilogue planned, but who knows… maybe something more will come one day.
8/19/25, 8:16 PM
Perfect total submission!

8/20/25, 9:09 AM
@[benelliot](/user/show/909446) Glad you’ve been along for the ride!
Anonymous
8/17/25, 4:35 PM
Wow hot! What a plot twist, didn't see that coming. Now I want to know how Dan breaks Chief Briggs. Looking forward to the next one.

8/20/25, 9:04 AM
@Anonymous Thanks!
8/16/25, 12:25 AM
The story is great, I really liked the pace of the story and the unexpected turn in the plot, which I love! If there is a sequel, I will read it with pleasure. But I would like to see a prequel about John and Chief Briggs how they became slaves)

8/20/25, 9:04 AM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) Thank you. I honestly haven’t put much thought into it yet, but a prequel or sequel has always been at the back of my mind. The idea of showing how John and Briggs were broken in does sound tempting…
8/19/25, 12:20 PM
Great beginning ! I've just started and read the first chapter but i'll go to the second immediately. Thank You !

8/20/25, 8:57 AM
@[naturellementsoumis](/user/show/1193036) Thank you!
8/20/25, 8:41 AM
I Like the story, but can you explain why Tanner gave so much torcher to a nice son and brother. They beat him raw while humiliating him. And then even the sex was degrading. Why, what did he do?