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12/24/20, 10:01 PM
Thank you @robbotg99x4you!! I think cheesy/corny is my brand đŸ˜‚ To answer your questions: Jack liked Marvin and wanted Marvin to come clean about what he and the twins did. He wanted to give him a chance to confess and own up to it when questioned in the ca. When he realized Marvin wasn't gonna change his ways or admit wrong doing he moved forward with getting him on the naughty list and manipulating him until he had him where he wanted him If I understand your second part, After Christmas, The elfs would stay in the North Pole and continue to be used for work making toys year round. Basically Santa's slaves! ;D Their minds will not resist.
12/24/20, 9:39 PM
Hi, Great story. I love stories that are corny. And to the question, what if Marvin came clean, and about what ? the fact he liked Jack? or . What about after Chrismas, as it is slow in januray. time off for the elfs. To be a Elf, All ways like that job.
12/24/20, 9:12 PM
@ForgottenCradle: Yeah, in my mind, I had most of that down to his conditioning, but some of it is also genuinely him. He *does* know that he makes bad decisions, so it's sort of a relief for him when someone else takes charge. @Jgak: I've got several chapters of Web of Trust at least partially complete, including the next one. So, they shouldn't be too long. It's really just down to when I have time and feel up to finishing them off. There'll be more of Cop A Feel as well.
12/24/20, 7:37 PM
Great start. That sounds like the most confusing hangover morning possible.
12/24/20, 6:39 PM
Very excited to see where this goes!
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12/24/20, 6:09 PM
Great story! I've wondered where you've been!
12/24/20, 4:18 PM
Holy WOW!! Great work!!!
12/24/20, 4:05 PM
I loved the way you described the masculinization in this story, especially the way you described David getting hairier, beefier, an muskier. All around, a good short story!
12/24/20, 3:47 PM
wow
12/24/20, 2:43 PM
hope u do continue. would like to c where this goes....