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10/14/20, 4:34 AM
Always interesting to see another take on the extremely durable original material, although this one didn't do very much for me erotically, since I found the costumes more cute and silly than sexy. Also, I was very confused about the setting; your narrative voice sounds completely American, and the characters sounded American too. Why not just set it in an all-male American institution, like a military college where they would naturally have a strict dress code and appearance?
10/14/20, 3:30 AM
another hypno dream coming to night terry
10/14/20, 3:11 AM
I love this idea "turn the kinder/accepintg/just misinformed guys into domminat daddy types and the homophobic one into think cowbois?" I think making guys who kind, nice, accepting into dominant men is great.
10/14/20, 1:52 AM
And the hunt begins XD I want to see the other mind control devices/methods you have in mind for the new guys ^ ^
jamiemboy
10/14/20, 1:05 AM
Really loved it! amazing story! especially the buzzcut.
Moby
10/14/20, 12:52 AM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you! Yeah the lack of an explenation of what exactly caused the changes was always my biggest issue with the original. So, I thought to fix it~ Glad you enjoyed it
10/14/20, 12:50 AM
I've always been a fan of the original source material and enjoyed your version of the week of transformations. I appreciate your explanation of the Master behind the changes. Great work!
10/14/20, 12:32 AM
amazing!
10/13/20, 9:40 PM
I think all three threads can work, as for Levi, after the Locker Room, what about a Cowboy geathering? turn the kinder/accepintg/just misinformed guys into domminat daddy types and the homophobic one into think cowbois?
10/13/20, 8:24 PM
I liked it, but somehow I felt the Adam substory didn't really pay out. I was hoping that the Sheik was Adam who secretly ran away due to his sexuality and set things up to attract/dominate the protagonist.