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Alex Lat
10/8/20, 11:18 PM
its too much to ask this story be real ? love it , perfect
10/8/20, 9:31 PM
Great chapter! I was worried about Toby since the beginning, I'm glad they rescued him, and found Cruz's brother along the way. I like the part about Tempest, and his cryptic message. I'm honored that you put my name is as a character, he seems like a sweetie. If you're curious as to why I chose the name Tempest, it's because it's a reference to a great wolf spirit of storm (Do with that info what you will). In regards to your character, I don't have a clue as to who he's looking for or what "the arrival" is, but I hope you'll show us soon. As usual, I very much look forward to more chapters!
10/8/20, 8:31 PM
Absolutely great story. I love the concept and follow through, and my only issues are in grammar and word choice. Details are what make a world more real, so I appreciate the little family lore that explains the how and why behind the what. I would love to see a series of this, a family tree maybe?
10/8/20, 7:42 PM
Yay, nanites !! And the story is well written too. Thanks !
10/8/20, 7:04 PM
fantastically well written and so much fun to see his progression. nice work!
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
10/8/20, 5:28 PM
This really gets me wanting to try chastity, longterm.
Anonymous
10/8/20, 3:34 PM
Amazing! Can't wait to see more!
Robodrone
10/8/20, 2:25 PM
Excitedly awaiting our upgrade!
10/8/20, 1:23 PM
Loved this story!!
Cumguts
10/8/20, 1:05 PM
duuuude, i would kill to see more stuff like this!! your writing is deliciously descriptive, and the kinks involved are like laser-targeted to my tastes, haha