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10/3/20, 9:51 PM
is this story done or is there another part?
10/3/20, 9:50 PM
I do want Bob as the boyfriend but dont forget his bitching and house duties! About the Michael, make him open that site to earn money for Dan. Its sad that he quited the sport club, I would have loved for you to control his coach on the future :P Btw. Whats the name of that story you mentioned? The one that's about a twink implanting memories to a man to create his perfect dilf?
Lusty Stallion
10/3/20, 9:45 PM
What a atory man! So much to love about it.
10/3/20, 9:14 PM
Didn't know we had so many avid authors and readers in DC! Great work!
10/3/20, 7:57 PM
Really nice scene! Jason's and the Caesar's (I forgot his name, paradoxaly) stories captivate me as much as the prince's or the ongoing power changes. But it's really short... I hope it means a lot happens next chapters, at least in status quo, even if they are indeed massive changes in this one too.
NZDom
10/3/20, 7:47 PM
I like the idea of making Bob the house wife and Dan the man of the house with the boys following his every order and looking up to him. love reading your stories! thanks for writing :D
Oct 2, 2020
Anonymous
10/3/20, 5:55 PM
There are writers on this blog who are English-speaking who cannot write as well as you. You did a good job. The two or three boo-boos were more syntax and conversational than hard-core grammar. Loved it!!
10/3/20, 5:20 PM
For Bob, I'm very interested in a romance angle, and I would prefer him to be more respected that Michael. The new suggestions are very nice! Make a lot of sense for Bob and even with only three it feels like things will be different for Michael. For the future, yeah, perhaps makes Michael a slave who loves to do anything the other men tell him to. Making him more passive would be great. Truly feels like he needs that anger management.
Oct 3, 2020
10/3/20, 5:01 PM
It was a good story. I would've loved to see more changes, or maybe more consistent changes between all 3 men, but it was fun to read through. One nitpick is that there didn't seem to be any amount of mind control at all.
10/3/20, 4:51 PM
I personaly think that Dan should have Bob as a sex slave/pet but not just him you should also make Bob's kids sex slaves/pets as well and all of them willing to have sex with each other if Dan wants it.