Very creative and clever! I especially enjoyed the third chapter when Julien and Gil were subliminally programming each other. Awesome work!

I think part of it is the hope that the second son, Dell right, yeah Dell, is either straight but with a love of submission and so enjoys the idea of being a good boy or he is bisexual and so easily falls under the sway of Dan, and so he becomes a quite willing boyfriend sort of guy for him. I just like the amusing turn around that one of the three actually naturally like what is going on. So yeah, I think Dan dating the youngest of the three family members (and probably around his own age) would be more fun. Oooh yeah, so cool to hear the direct 'there will be incest' answer. Its kind of hot to think how far the three will have fallen when they don't think anything of sucking each other's cocks or rimming each other's asses or getting fucked together by the same guy. Maybe if Dell is treated poorly but his father and older brother then he can be allowed to top them, as a sign from Dan saying how good Dell is as a boy. Ooh. Dell is on the team. Awesome. Soooo maybe he can do something like get the coach of his team to see some videos and maybe said coach can come over and be a good bro as well. Hell, since you didn't design who said coach is, if you want to keep it in the family (lol) then it can be Dell's uncle, Bob's brother, and the two could have fun times under Dan's control. While I am not so much into feet I do agree that having Michael be into a differnet body part would be fun. I think muscles. I can see him wanting to worship them or have his own be played with. I also see him as a moaning needy slut when it comes to being fucked. Now, this is my opinion, but I like the idea of Bob being allowed to keep respectability outside of the home. He has a good business and so I think Dan wouldn't want to ruin that. Michael though, as he has dropped out of college, doesn't have a job, and is basically living at the gym, can be turned to less respectable activities. Oooh maybe besides his special work at the shop and his online shows he can become a 'trainer' of say some gay guys from the gym - he gets paid officially to train but really its all about sex. Just an idea. In this by the way I really think it would be cool, like I said, for Dell to actually realize what is going on, like it, and want more of it. I think that might be a fun dynamic. Obviously I am just reader, you are the writer, so do what works for you. :)

Yes, I made this one shorter because it's actually half of a chapter that was getting too long.

okay. comments ahem. to be fair continuity is what you make of it but we don't know what happened to the initial wave of men Smitty and Mike and I think well it's the comic that has submitting deciding to leave the town not necessarily the original story so so it's entirely possible in addition to other meteors that there are rogue assets going around doing as they will. or not all pollination needs to be direct from host still still give something for our Scully to do somehow missing a ridiculously odd migration pattern all to one defunct farm overall overall this has been a solid experience

I wish I could find a file to change me like that.

Well then, time to use Dell to get the coach! Or the team to get more dads into action? But thats for further development and if you want to. That being said... Since Bob is so into Dan's cock, how about making the sons into other kind of body parts? Like Michael into feet? Seems a good start if he is going to be on the bottom?

@Heru Kane. I get curious, why do you think that Bob couldn't be a realistic boyfriend figure? About all four having fun together, I agree. Incest is on of my favorite kinks and I want to get there! Sadly I think I put the pace on the story too slow, I'll try to fix that. ;) And lastly, maybe Michael isn't on a team anymore but Dell is :) @AnonReader. Thanks for your comment. Yes, this was more of a developtment chapter for Michael character and future interactions than a fun sexy super kinky one. I'll try to compensate that in the next chapters.

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Although not much sex content, I appreciate this chapter as bridging development. I can only say I pretty much agree with Heru Kane's suggestions. If anything, I'm neutral on Bob as a "boyfriend" (he's so devoted already to Dan as his number one bitch). The suggestions for Dan (muscle slut, cum guzzler, obviously thinking he's just being a masc muscle bro in all of these activities) is very hot and Heru Kane put it in very eloquent/hot/suggestive words. Thank you for continuing the story.

Well, normally, in a story the act of making a guy a whore causes things to be unbelievable but I can totally see Michael providing the full special at the shop that is basically him sucking cock or getting fucked. Ooh, maybe make it so he doesn't consider it as him being a whore but rather some other masculine thing that could have the men who come by amused and such. But yeah, I think Michael going all sexy time online would be fine. I also agree with the one poster who is sad that he left the team, cause taking over a team is super hot. That said there is always the potential of taking over the jocks at the gym. hehe I still think having Bob be a boyfriend figure is not exactly a realistic thing. Maybe you could make the second son the boyfriend figure. I do think, like the one poster suggested, that it shouldn't be just Dan and Bob and Dan and Michael and Dan and the second son but all four having fun together, though in different ways. I think bringing forth more of Michael's jock and bro tendencies could be fun. He isn't super intelligent anyway so having him focus on gym work and online porn and then the special work at the shop would work well for him. He isn't gay, he is a bro, and its totally logical for bros to like the muscles of bros and also as a jock he needs all the protein he can get, and what better source then from cocks.