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10/18/20, 11:36 AM
> I really enjoy the Sheriff’s and Snake’s “rebellion.” Snake calls it resistance but I see more rebellion in the Sheriff > Absolutely agree! As a matter of fact, in Chapter 16, you will see just how committed the Sheriff is to this idea. > I can’t really say the Deputy is a bad man, just a loyal one. > I don't think it's the Deputy that's the problem. Imagine you're some kind of Machiavellian Dom Puppetmaster and you "create" a super-powered being who's completely within your control? The weapon's not bad, right? It's just there to be used.
Martin
10/18/20, 10:34 AM
> Anglophobic Racism. 0 How is this anglophobic? And I don't see any (reverse) racism either, just raceplay.
Daydreamer
10/18/20, 8:38 AM
Anglophobic Racism. 0
10/18/20, 7:47 AM
Will they be a sequel? Nice story!
10/18/20, 7:23 AM
i would suggest that you tag for what is in the chapter itself, not what a reader might expect from the series as a whole. Typically with first installments there isn't much action, so readers tend to be a bit understanding when there is a shortage of tags, but there's already such a lovely whipping right here! No problems!
10/18/20, 7:20 AM
can't wait for more.
10/18/20, 6:06 AM
brainwash him into being a muscle buttom slave please. +1 to Bob Alan too!
Author
10/18/20, 5:49 AM
Not an AI story, note "Part 1" (P1), have patience.
Bob Alan
10/18/20, 5:18 AM
would love to see Bruce muscle up more, grow bigger to please his boy, and impress his friends.
revenge
10/18/20, 4:28 AM
anxiously waiting for new chapters please...