Recent Comments

9/6/20, 4:53 AM
Soooooo Hot! I was hard & leaking all through the story (even wishing I was getting the massage). Enjoyed the cum & piss swallowing. You are a great writer; keep up the great work!
9/6/20, 4:44 AM
Great story, totally believable and very hot. You had me hard & leaking the hole time! Keep up the great work and I want to read a lot more from you, dude!
9/6/20, 4:41 AM
great read, I love all the themes you had included in this story.
Connor
9/6/20, 4:26 AM
really great story. I loved how you had his transformation playing out and him ending up as a big dumb straight man was hot to read.
9/6/20, 4:13 AM
need more of this!
9/6/20, 3:31 AM
Hot as hell!
9/6/20, 3:09 AM
EXCELLENT WRITING; the story had me from beginning till end!!!
9/6/20, 1:56 AM
i love this so much. I'm reminded of books like Annihilation with the creeping dread of the inevitable. This is great!
9/6/20, 1:52 AM
will we see the next part soon?
nycboot
9/6/20, 12:28 AM
Wow, absman420. You've really reworked a lot. The scene with the boys felt like a kind of filler in version 1, but here you've made it so much more integral to the plot. You've built up Tony's initial resistance so much that when he finally does get the plant it's much more significant. And the thread with Murdock and the old man is also revised in a way that I really like. I think I mentioned this long ago, but the main thing that "gets" me about this story (asides from being one of the hottest stories on this site) is that there is no sex. Sure the guys stick their dicks into the plant, but there's no sex. And yet it's one the most sexiest stories. I can't tell you how many times I've j/o thinking of various parts of the story.