Recent Comments

9/3/20, 2:27 PM
I echo Kyle's suggestion - there should be some evolution in Alex's attitude or character. Also, if you drive him to cracking - which would happen eventually, you should have a plan how to rebuild him afterwards.
9/3/20, 1:56 PM
No, they have a point. I have expanded the story (pending review) to hopefully make it less rushed.
Anonymous
9/3/20, 1:36 PM
I don't think the OnlyFans really matters. He's been advertising it the whole time, he just integrated it this time. The story was short but good and he might make some money off it, so what?
Aug 31, 2020
9/3/20, 12:51 PM
great story, wish I was invited to that party.
9/3/20, 12:49 PM
I hope you are doing better now
Apr 19, 2010
9/3/20, 12:48 PM
Love this. Wish there is a sequel with the other boys and their dads.
9/3/20, 12:46 PM
Very hot chapter! I'm so glad that you decided to continue Hypnothrill's awesome series.
9/3/20, 12:43 PM
Needs more chapter! Need to know the aftermath!
9/3/20, 12:05 PM
Thank you!
9/3/20, 11:59 AM
Absolutely, love this story, keep going!