Recent Comments

8/16/20, 7:52 PM
very sweet! i love it.
Anonymous
8/16/20, 7:47 PM
This is so good! Love the transformation. Can't wait to see where you take this in the last chapter.
8/16/20, 7:36 PM
I think the city will have two new people in the porn industry soon
8/16/20, 7:15 PM
@anon - Hah, I was wodnering if you were talking about jammers. That's what I wear when I swim. I don't feel comfortable in a brief cut when I'm swimming, but I hate the drag I get off trunks.
Swizzington
8/16/20, 7:10 PM
To be honest, this story doesn't really dive deeply into Blaine's motivations. But I am definitely considering writing more stories (possibly a prequel) with the character, so that might be explained in future :-)
8/16/20, 7:00 PM
Swizzington, I entirely agree with your comment. Write what you want to see put out there, not to please a fickle audience. I have read a few of your stories, and I enjoy them no matter how they resolve themselves. I am curious as to why our young hypnotist is so cold-blooded, but I suppose that will be explained in future chapters.
Anonymous
8/16/20, 6:56 PM
love those short scenes of how everyone is settling in there new lives can't wait for how the reporter and cameraman turns out. This series is turning into one of mine favorites on this site
Anonymous
8/16/20, 6:51 PM
@Derek Williams Nice can't wait for the swimmer just fond out the trunks are called jammers keep up the good writing
Anonymous
8/16/20, 6:49 PM
excellent
Anonymous
8/16/20, 6:23 PM
Please please *please* continue this - this is one of the hottest stories on here.