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8/22/20, 12:24 AM
love this series. Wonder if its possible to create a formula like it
8/22/20, 12:01 AM
are you going to write more stories bc yours are my fav and i wish i coild read more of them
Aug 21, 2020
Baple
8/21/20, 11:58 PM
Great story! I love seeing your uploads So jealous of your victims
8/21/20, 11:37 PM
So awesome to get this update! It totally made my day. Love to see the Stantons are still enslaved and completely dedicated to their tasks, I really missed them so much! I also like the soccer takedown, it was super duper HOT! I kinda miss the piss drinking stuff, though. It kinda make sense too for Neil to want to "recycle" his drug. I dont know if you take suggestions, but in later chapters can you do a time jump? Like lets see how these people are like 15 years or so later, still under Neil's control That would be fantastic.
8/21/20, 11:31 PM
Once again, such a nice work! I enjoyed every paragraph, every scene, every dialog. I wasn't expecting Jake to shapeshift, but I should have learned by now, you are full of surprises... very pleasant surprises! I can't wait to see where this goes next! I hope you'll continue to write and I hope there are many more chapters to come and many more stories to come as well. Keep up the good work ;-)
8/21/20, 11:27 PM
yes! Lovely to see you posting again! yes, yes yes!
Anonymous
8/21/20, 11:17 PM
OMG, this is soo good!! Thank you so much for writing this! I mainly go to this site to enjoy big-sub-small-top stories, but never did i know that i also enjoy skillfully written identity theft story! the slow but sure manipulation as well as the rise to power from cabin boy to officer makes my little buddy hard throughout reading this!! =) thanks again! I will be sure to regularly check for your work!
8/21/20, 10:36 PM
Owen needs vision and a big screen smart TV stat. he could ruin ALL of the fun! but NO... that's making the game too easy... I like this 'long haul' play that Jake's got going on. I am SO here for this series and you continue to deliver excellently each installment!
8/21/20, 9:40 PM
so the balloon lead to the self inflation, the measuring tape led to the "snake" growth. simple household items leading to changes... need to find connect something finding clothes for the behemoth, and maybe something less to lead to the expansion of the property so it's more fitting to Richard's current build
Anonymous
8/21/20, 9:38 PM
super hot. hope theres more