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i love all your stories!!!
8/12/20, 3:28 AM
just the exact kinda shit im into. this story (and most others youve written) are absolutely perfect. although this is definitely a complete story and i have 100% respect for this being where it leaves off, i cant help but wanna see a little bit more of a slow decline. if you ever put out an inbetweequal i will be there in a heartbeat
8/12/20, 2:43 AM
Honestly, I've really been enjoying this series. It's incredibly wholesome. It gives me the same warm feeling I got when I read "The Coffee Shop." I can't wait to read the next chapter on Pine's life as he grows into a handsome young man.
Smpke
8/12/20, 2:36 AM
Damn, write some more, and let's see where these gorilla balls lead him to , as well as those he encounters.
8/12/20, 1:57 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter. Didn't feel too long at all. I like the creative ways Collin comes up with to enslave people. Excited for part 2
8/12/20, 12:05 AM
Pine really got his groove when it comes to mind controlling now. Can't wait for act 3 to start. really enjoyed the whole journey to the sports club
8/11/20, 9:49 PM
Ooh this chapter was a hot one. I love when the bully becomes the slave to his victim. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Anonymous
8/11/20, 9:31 PM
I'd love for Lenny to be in charge of the whole team. All member should see him as the superior man he is and only if they follow his every sexual whim, then they can perform on the field
8/11/20, 8:57 PM
wish there was more this was soooo goood
8/11/20, 8:13 PM
I'm enjoying this story and the developing relationship between Aed and Tim. I look forward to where you take the story next.
8/11/20, 8:01 PM
Great Ending!