Recent Comments

5/13/20, 3:46 PM
i'm a huge fan of The Bargain series and Ch 5 was one of my favorites along with the pastor chapter. Its nice to read a chapter the expands on the world that Wishbone created. You did a stellar job. Loved the uniform created from the demon seed!
Anonymous
5/13/20, 3:16 PM
great story... really enjoyed it... look forward to more writing!!!
5/13/20, 2:58 PM
Yes, let's go to the station and get enslaved along with the chief and every officer. Time for some degrading fun humiliation 👍
5/13/20, 2:56 PM
Yes, let's go to the station and get enslaved along with the chief and every officer there. Time for some degrading, humiliating fun activities
5/13/20, 2:24 PM
thank you, and I hope so too
5/13/20, 1:28 PM
nycboot has said he wants to write the ending, so I'm yielding to him and focusing on the angle of the story I really like instead. (Hope he's not upset about me putting that out there.)
Anonymous
5/13/20, 12:52 PM
More dad slave... i think Ted and Brian should be Colins enforcers now.
Anonymous
5/13/20, 12:39 PM
please make him a slave, this is so hot
5/13/20, 12:37 PM
I meant the one who wants to write the conclusion of the story
5/13/20, 12:22 PM
Thank you for reading it, Redcoma; I'm glad to have another fan of the original story liking my part in developing the world.