Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/23/20, 5:59 PM
Have read before. Enjoyed it just as much this time. Well written. Caught my attention from the first.
2/23/20, 5:59 PM
Really a hot story, I hope you write more soon.
TheAuthor
2/23/20, 5:21 PM
Thanks. I'm still just a noob in writing in general so I'm just slowly progressing as a, *well hopefully*, a writer.
Anonymous
2/23/20, 4:46 PM
There arent many original premises, really, just original takes on themes. This is an enjoyable one. A few grammatic errors but really a lot of fun and so full of potential! And if your intent is to set up future chapters, this is a good prologue.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
2/23/20, 4:41 PM
I would volunteer to have anybody zap me with that pen/laser doodad.
Anonymous
2/23/20, 4:09 PM
this is like seriously hot. need more
Anonymous
2/23/20, 2:46 PM
Underrated af
TheAuthor
2/23/20, 2:25 PM
Yeah, I had very specific ideas for it but I don't have experience on writing humiliation/punishment stuff so I just made it *really* vague. So that way, other writers can freely add chapters about it if they choose to do so.
sergio10andrade@gmail.com
2/23/20, 1:39 PM
I can understand not wanting "to get in the rabbit hole of dark stories" I am often turned off by some of the graphic nature of humiliation in the stories on this site but I think your story would have better if descibe some of the details of your subjects's punishment,
sergio10andrade@gmail.com
2/23/20, 1:30 PM
Enjoying your series, out of curiosity your spells is the language based on Welsh?