Recent Comments

Author
12/22/19, 6:25 PM
Well, perhaps 'clickbaiting' was too strong a term. Feel free to remove if desired. My intent was to enhance the surprise twist of the story, but I see your point.
Anonymous
12/22/19, 4:46 PM
"dick spit" and "ball jelly" fuck yeah
12/22/19, 1:15 PM
Great story! Terrific plot and character development. Well done!
Anonymous
12/22/19, 1:03 PM
i see. thank you for your explanation. i loon forward to reading more from you
12/22/19, 12:59 PM
Hi! This is what I would call a "Definitive Version." It extends the story and dives more into the worldbuilding.
Anonymous
12/22/19, 12:54 PM
This snippet is hot but i would like To clarify, is this an extended version of super sucker or a companion or what?
Anonymous
12/22/19, 11:46 AM
hot and hilarious at the same time
Anonymous
12/22/19, 7:03 AM
I'm waiting for you work in part 3.
Varlance
12/22/19, 3:18 AM
Nice work A Voyeur Fan and Happy Stroking :)
12/22/19, 2:05 AM
@Happy Stroking Thanks so much for your contribution! It's exactly the sort of extension I'd like to see on these "Bad Endings"