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10/4/17, 10:39 AM
Wonderful!
Anonymous
10/4/17, 4:22 AM
The substance of the story is great. I can't wait to see where this goes. As for form, easy to correct any deficiencies. Use MSWord. The program has great spell/grammar checking that will help you with grammar and usage. That will help you produce a better written story. Like I said, the narrative was great. Keep going.
Lenny
10/4/17, 2:37 AM
Love this. I like they become unaware of their altered reality. Maybe a sequel for guys into long thin legs or super tiny waist.
Andyrew36
10/4/17, 2:32 AM
Yes there is!!! They get into more trouble after work
10/4/17, 2:09 AM
It's great! I hope there is more to come.
Anonymous
10/3/17, 11:19 PM
^
Anonymous
10/3/17, 11:05 PM
maybe the brother comes back and join in the fun.
monsterboycam@gmail.com
10/3/17, 10:28 PM
The monster comes from his username he uses he thinks he is super hung. And it show cases his size for his viewers. I'm interested to see what the people reading want to happen to him. I like suggestions. So possibly getting hairy is an option. The mind control comes from him signing up for the request section. Basically anything that someone requests slowly starts to happen to him. I started with something simple that he wouldn't notice much to begin with. Him wanting to show his cock off more. It'll come into affect as his days go on. And he will have conflictions with it. Sorry if that wasn't clear enough.
Anonymous
10/3/17, 10:22 PM
Eventually someone should suggest he bring in his (male) friends into the cam show.
Anonymous
10/3/17, 8:08 PM
wheres the mind control?