Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/2/20, 3:12 AM
Glad you added another chapter. Can't wait to see where this goes!!
Jun 1, 2020
Anonymous
6/2/20, 3:12 AM
You are the master of plot twists!! Loved it!!!!
6/2/20, 1:52 AM
Not bad but you need to define the point of view, it changes back and forth even in the same paragraph.
6/1/20, 11:29 PM
Could this be a series story? I like it so much!!
Brisstar
6/1/20, 11:16 PM
hope there can be more great chapters created and paths developed.
6/1/20, 10:58 PM
agree with others that Leo is more fun as a selfish and reckless but not intentionally cruel person. I think there are lots of interesting ways for that to play out and Im excited to see what you go with :) I definitely wanna see Leo go wild and take what he wants (whatever that may be) without Pine there to stop him though, sounds hot and would help us get to know him!
6/1/20, 10:35 PM
T…z172… Oh, it's *you!* 😍😻 Glad to see you're still up to the old tricks, with new spins too! 🔥
6/1/20, 10:29 PM
excited for more, I already love these little goofs <3 can't wait for Nate to embrace the mind control more and make his puppy happy!
6/1/20, 10:26 PM
An excellent story to kick-off Distance Pride Month. **I support the Mystical Rentboi Agenda!**
6/1/20, 10:21 PM
Bro, well written bro.