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5/30/20, 6:55 AM
hmm,, put Leo into villain is good idea.. I wanna see more jock to get under and hot :D. But, it's up to you, i appreciate your choice.
Nutiper
5/30/20, 6:41 AM
@Somnius: I'm so glad to hear this, and so glad you liked it! I, too, am very happy this story is now complete. The alternate ending idea is an intriguing one -- it actually never occurred to me to wonder what that would look like, until you mentioned it! I think I was so focused on writing toward the happy ending I'd planned that I never pictured what a victory might mean for Linden. I don't think it's something I have it in me to write, but if there's anyone else on the site who wanted to do their own take on it, I certainly wouldn't mind. @Derek Williams: Damn, it's wild to hear from you, you're among my favorite authors on this site! I'm delighted you enjoyed it so much, and also that I got you to binge the whole thing. High praise! Also prrrretty glad that something I wrote could make you cum so much -- think of it as returning the favor. ;) @tenser13: Thank you so much!! I'm really heartened by your kind and generous comment! And yeah, it was a lot of work, haha... but also *very* gratifying to finally reach that conclusion! @Foster: I can't say it enough, it really means so much to hear this, and thank you for sharing it -- I feel thrilled and touched to know my story could have such an impact. I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed it so much! And you are VERY welcome!
5/30/20, 5:17 AM
Great analysis, Hypnothrill! It can be distracting when the image in your head--and especially the image between photos--does not match up, and that alienation breaks the immersion (didn't know you were a theatre fan!). And Willie, thank you for posting your own response. :)
5/30/20, 5:06 AM
This ending is pretty bittersweet for me as it was also one of the first stories that brought me to the genre many years ago. And still to this day, remains one of my top 10 all time reads. So all I have to say is thank you, and I hope to read more stories in the future!
5/30/20, 5:05 AM
Love this story! So hot, and the twist at the end is hilarious!
5/30/20, 4:53 AM
I think the challenge with using images in a story--and I definitely found this when I was doing all those image stories I posted to Tumblr--is that although a certain image might serve as an initial inspiration, a character might take on a life of their own once you start constructing the story. And then the character your readers encounter doesn't match up with the porn model in the picture, which sometimes leads to a very strange Brechtian alienation effect (especially in those stories where the same character is being played by different models in different pictures).
5/30/20, 4:38 AM
A twink hypnotizing 2 older guys? Please continue this!
Jan 18, 2017
5/30/20, 3:51 AM
No matter how many times I return to this story it still gets me crazy hard, I really love it!
Willie Cici
5/30/20, 3:13 AM
In case any one is wondering, I got a kick from Hyp's adaptation. I now regret not having given him permission to post his story. For this, I apologize to him. I also laughed at the 'Use your imagination' pic. I admit that I rely on the pics, maybe too much. For me there are the source of inspiration for the stories. I usually then dive into the story. I share the pics so that readers can see what I was thinking when I crafted the story. If I have annoyed readers with the pics, then hopefully my explanation will suffice.
Anonymous
5/30/20, 3:04 AM
Great story! Loved it!!!