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5/16/24, 10:13 PM
I did suggest John and Paul because I liked the Beatles. Hyp picked George. I think the barn was the coolest element. Our neighborhood in Nashville TN was pretty suburban but Paul’s family owned several acres and had a couple horses which we rode around on and a goat as well as some chickens. No donkey though unless you count me.
TW
5/16/24, 8:28 PM
I just wanted to thank you again for having written such a hot story full of deception, power play, delicious rubberyness, and acceptance (be it willing or not). This end so perfectly captures Hank's uninvolved methods when it comes to control - letting Nick come to it on his own terms (and in more ways than one 😉) - the few moments of indulgence between Hank and Nick are so magical, too. Somehow, even in the aftermath of the disaster, the boys have found together still, side-by-side - victims of their ultimate desires - the arrogant Adonis and self-sabotaging boy. I'm sure the next chapter will take some time, so know we'll patiently wait!

5/16/24, 9:47 PM
@TW Thank you :D I'm so glad you enjoyed it! It might take a little time to crank out the other side of the story, but it shouldn't be as long or voluminous (BIG TY to the poor admin who had to check through this).
Anonymous
5/16/24, 9:16 PM
wow this is hot is there going to be more chapters?
5/16/24, 7:44 PM
Incredible story Todd . An older man being part of a younger pack is so hot
5/6/24, 11:22 PM
I already want to see the other Tompson brother and I would like to see Eric in his police suit.

5/16/24, 7:10 PM
@Morbius We will definitely see Eric in his police uniform. I'm currently planning a few scenes for each of them at their places of work. We will eventually meet Peter the older brother. But it's going to be a bit. It's only Saturday evening and he won't be introduced until Monday.
Morbius Dunkey
5/6/24, 11:16 PM
I just read the entire story so far. The truth is that I liked it a lot, everything is very well thought out and now it is one of my favorite erotic sagas with the best script. I love the control that Jhon has over the father and son and the things he forces them to do that they don't like but that they enjoy at the same time. If I had to say only one thing that bothers and disappoints me, it is that the father still has a flabby and old body. I would more like to see Chris as a sexy dilf with a big ass and huge muscular tits. In my opinion, the scene of Chris and his son having sex would have been better this way. If it had been like that from the beginning I would be more excited, like Joe. But I only say this because of my preferences. I actually don't speak English, I'm reading your story thanks to the translator on the page. And this comment is translated from Spanish to English by Google. Sorry if something doesn't make sense, I just wanted to give my opinion. I hope you continue writing more of this erotic story.

5/16/24, 7:07 PM
@Morbius Dunkey It was never my intention to make Chris seem super overweight. I explain it a little more in the next chapter, which is processing right now. I hope everything translates well, I use a lot of sayings and phrases that hopefully translate correctly.
May 15, 2024
Anonymous
5/16/24, 6:09 PM
Your writing style so great and I love how your stories have actual emotional hooks to them . I just wanted to know if your still continuing your previous knight story

Pcm
5/16/24, 6:16 PM
@Anonymous I will, of course! However, I kinda hit a writer's block for that story. It's a really weird problem. I got the plot figured out, but unable to conjure the hot scenario to accompany it. Well, I actually do have one sex scene that I really want to write about, but it is more towards the end of the story. Actually, this story is meant to be a prequel of sort set in the same universe. It is a much shorter story, and once it is done, I will return to Knightly Duties so that I could finish William's story. Thank you for liking my work!

Anonymous
5/16/24, 6:42 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Also love how your stories have heavy emphasis on family and their love for one another , I just hope both respective families of the two stories have happy ending

Pcm
5/16/24, 6:57 PM
@Anonymous "Happy ending" is awfully relative, isn't it? I am aiming for a "hot" ending, but depending on whom you ask, not everyone will agree that the ending is "happy" (at least, to them.)
5/16/24, 5:17 PM
A barefoot, shirtless, weed smoking hippie. How hot. Could have him drop to an animalistic level of "empty headed" :D
5/16/24, 5:16 PM
Turned into shirtless chicken or believing to be a donkey is so hot. Very nice.
5/16/24, 4:35 PM
So damn hot! Cant wait to see he bottoms!