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12/18/22, 6:00 PM
Allright. I'm Scottish. Naw much love for the English aristocracy, but I must say I'm enjoying the writing and story line. Very well done!

12/18/22, 6:07 PM
Personally, I hate the English Aristocracy myself, but this is more an attempt at creating an intentionally unrealistic version of that world to play out the character’s journey from self denial to acceptance. A real gentleman’s club would not be this fun, mostly a bunch of rich guys arguing over how to screw over the poor. Mainly I just wanted to force him into a position where he could no longer deny his desires for something that the character knows is problematic. @[Stroppy Author](/user/show/227812)

12/18/22, 7:59 PM
I love what you say regarding his journey from denial to self acceptance. Makes the story that much more relatable for me personally. @[RedOwlCyrus](/user/show/908310)
12/18/22, 7:36 PM
So fucking hot
blankbot
12/18/22, 7:20 PM
Like your other stories, this one is extremely well written and EROTIC.
12/18/22, 6:42 PM
Wow! excellent so far. I usually like the cops to be the submissives and abused, but you have me hooked so far!
Anonymous
12/18/22, 6:28 PM
Keep it coming - this setup is fantastic!
12/18/22, 6:11 PM
awesome, looking forward to it
12/18/22, 3:46 PM
Although hypnosis isn’t my thing, the comments were simply too tempting to resist seeing your take on the way this kink plays out in a real relationship. I felt for Noah the whole time, and I appreciated how you handled the conflict in his mind, from the way he lost control over the weekend to all his concerns and reluctance at different times. It was wise of you, and it made the story deeper, to write Noah as not utterly turned off by having a mindless sex toy. It wasn’t all emptiness for him, and he seemed pleased to have Danny back with him. It’s only that… well, Danny isn’t pleased. The impossible tension is enough to make me feel even as I write this comment. Well done!

Martin
12/18/22, 5:29 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) I know this kind of story is problematic for you, that more it means that you took the time to read and "stand" it! :kissing_heart: I am really curious as to what you think about the 2nd chapter - especially since you are interested in the character's conflicts and feelings. And I'd hope that the 2nd chapter also makes an interesting read for you!
12/18/22, 3:09 AM
This was very well done. I loved it from start to finish. I'm real excited about chapter 2. Gonna go read it right now! Had to type this comment with one hand cuz I'm really ready for chapter 2! haha

Martin
12/18/22, 5:26 PM
@[Pwrliftermscl](/user/show/941605) I hope you had the chance to read the second chapter, too? :) I hope it was ... just as stimulating for you!
12/18/22, 4:07 PM
This is a really interesting twist on things. The idea that a secondary personality of Danny’s became revealed by having him hide/throwaway/etc his primary personality was surprising and a great way to keep this fresh. Well done! I’m excited to see what happens next. I too was/am sort of expecting Gerald to turn out to have hypnotized Noah and that be what caused some of this. My vote would probably be for the Gerald option, but I’m happy to read more either way.

Martin
12/18/22, 5:25 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Thank you so much! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: It's always difficult to find new angles on those well-beaten story ideas. I'm really happy that this is appreciated. The Gerald option certainly seems to be the most popular, let's see what I'll come up with...
12/18/22, 1:28 AM
I like this story a lot. In many hypno stories some becomes a drone or sex slut and that's the end. I have read few stories where we hear about life after their conversion. I'm happy your story deals with the issue of "What happens after they are converted to sex toy?" It's a more complete treatment of hypno rather than just a and you're mine and then the story ends. It's more relatable because I feel for the characters especially Noah. How about a simple name for the new Danny; maybe Dirk from the movie "Boogie Nights"?

Martin
12/18/22, 5:20 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thank you so much. That's exactly the point. Even though I like "conversion to drone stories" (they make me rock hard with perfect reliability), once the deed has done, the stories are over. No matter how the author tries, it's always only a rehash. The personality is destroyed, mindless drone takes over, end of story. I love the idea that you can become someone or something else and still have your original personality buried underneath. That this identity can remember, experience and maybe even enjoy the process. That's what *I* wanted to be able to. And, as you write, it allows for way more story telling. I'll note down "Dirk". I've not seen Boogie Nights myself, but I'll look the character up.