Recent Comments

11/27/25, 9:59 PM
The best chapter you've ever written. I liked the pace of the story and its length. It would be fun to see Jacob and the Warlock have sex in front of Bella. I also think it would be cool if the Warlock subjugated Bella's handsome father and turned him into his slave, turning him into his assistant slave as well. Bella comes home and her father introduces her to his new boyfriend. The Warlock and Bella's father have sex in the house, and Bella hears everything: the bed slamming against the wall and dirty talk. Of course, this is my fantasy. I don't think you'll realize it.

11/28/25, 1:29 AM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) Thanks for the positive feedback! Lovely that you enjoyed it.:innocent: Oh, Charlie is really a desirable target, am I right? One of the most decent Twilight characters, and a good cop... I just love guys in uniforms. :smirk: But, yeah, that wouldn't happen as you describe. Meaning that Charlie will play his part on epilogues, so this would be a spoiler if I would describe it further:wink:. And speaking about Mage and Jacob mating... It will be described as a dormant memory that will surface inside of Jake's mind. Not in front of Bella, of course, but really similar. But that's also a spoiler.:upside_down_face:
11/28/25, 12:51 AM
Hope you continue this
11/27/25, 10:48 PM
Good job. Keep it up (as it were).
11/27/25, 10:44 PM
Fantastically hot and powerful story again from @lordandmasterinldn With stories like this, you'll be converting everyone to submit to your will :wink:
11/27/25, 10:20 PM
Love it

11/27/25, 10:33 PM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) Hehe! Cheers :3
11/27/25, 10:13 PM
This great fun! Keep it up!
11/27/25, 6:33 PM
Loved it!!! Very cool take on JohnSmith's story (and he is one of my favorite writers on the site)
11/27/25, 5:55 PM
Holy shit. You weren't kidding about angst incoming!
11/27/25, 2:44 PM
Definitely looking forward to more of this.
11/27/25, 1:01 AM
Great story arc) I liked it with an open ending 👍

11/27/25, 10:33 AM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :) I started writing this as a quick one-shot when the idea got in my head, but there are three more chapters in the whole story (since I didn't get to the more raunchy stuff in part one). They should all pop out in the next week-and-a-bit.